I'm writing a historic novel here is an excerpt
Chapter 9
The tropical heat of the doldrums, which had turned the between-decks of the Saint-Sébastien into a suffocating grease-oven of stagnant fermentation, did not break with a clean storm. It dissolved slowly, leaking northward through weeks of grey, salt-crusted rolling until the Atlantic trade winds died into the heavy, chilling mists of the Grand Banks. For the three Rocheron siblings and their silent shadow, Catherine Forestier, the world did not change its shape; it merely changed its temperature. The sticky, molasses-heavy aroma of Captain Poulet’s anti-scorbutic potion, which still coated the back of Simon’s throat like a bitter layer of scorched resin, was gradually replaced by the thin, metallic stink of subarctic sea-fog—a wet, piercing draft that seeped directly through their short wool coats and turned their leather boots into stiff, salt-whitened cages.
It was during the dawn watch of an unrecorded August morning that the horizon finally hardened. To a man from the landlocked interior of the Sarthe, where the world was measured by the familiar stone steeples of the Vairais and the low-yield clay furrows of one's neighbors, the first sight of the North American coast did not register as land. It appeared as a line of low, bruised clouds that refused to move with the wind.
Simon Rocheron leaned over the salt-crusted oak railing of the forecastle, his short frame tense, his small, calloused fingers hooked obsessively into the drawstrings of his leather purse. He was twenty-four years old, his mind packed tight with the predatory, ledger-driven calculations of a "labourer's helper" who had spent his youth watching the French state strip the security from his family’s hovel. He did not look at the rising coast with the romantic, spiritual awe of his sister Marie-Madeleine, nor did he see the holy tabula rasa painted by the Counter-Reformation priests in the Dieppe vestries. He looked at it as an adversary. He squinted through the grey rack of the fog, his eyes scanning the distant, dark silhouette for something—anything—that resembled a boundary line. He looked for the familiar geometric markers of European property: the straight alignment of a drainage ditch, the cleared margin of a seigneurial forest, the white plaster face of a tithe-barn, or the slate roof of a bailiff’s office.
There was nothing. The coast rose from the churning gray foam of the Atlantic as a colossal, unyielding wall of dark stone, a monumental reef that seemed to have been dropped into the ocean before God had ever thought to invent the Third Estate. The sight hit Simon’s executive ego like a physical blow. In France, the cage was human; you could litigate your way through a will, you could bribe a laboureur for a seat at the parish assembly, and you could hide from the King's tax archers inside the crowded rooms of a transit inn. But this land carried no human scaffolding. It was an immense, silent weight that didn't care about his four-year indentured contract with the Guyons, and for the first time since they left the port of Dieppe, a cold, visceral panic settled beneath his ribs—the realization that if he was to get his land, he would have to tear it out of the teeth of a monster that didn't even know his name.
Beside him, twenty-three-year-old Gervais stood perfectly balanced against the pitching of the hull, his massive, broad-shouldered frame planted wide on the damp timbers. The giant did not rush his breath. While his older brother sweated with short-term calculations, Gervais moved with that ancestral, deliberate slowness that had defined his walk since the flat tracks of the Verrais. His long, bright-blond hair, loose and matted with brine, whipped across his wide blue eyes. He didn't speak. He stared at the looming coastline with a posed, unhurried stillness, his senses quietly, methodically dismantling the physical density of the new world.
Where Simon saw an empty void, Gervais decoded materials. He smelled the air—not the sour wine and boiled lard of Le Cheval Blanc, but a sharp, frozen perfume of wet slate, ancient peat, and the deep, resinous cedar-bark that lay buried beneath the snows of the interior. He adjusted his center of gravity instinctively with every rolling pitch of the Saint-Sébastien, his heavy boots absorbing the shock of the ocean through his heels. He looked at the massive stone flanks of the continent and gave a slow, expressionless nod. The land was heavy, it was dense, and it would require a wall of stone to keep the frost from the bone, but it followed a logical physics that his skin could understand.
The ship pushed further north, guided by Captain Jean Poulet’s expert, scarred fingers on the tiller, until the fog tore open to reveal the grey, looming silhouette of The Rock, “Terre-Neuve”, now Newfoundland and then one of the districts of New-France. Though the Saint-Sébastien did not drop its iron anchor into the freezing depths of the bays, the proximity to this French colonial outpost was close enough for the passengers to smell the salt-cured industry of the shore. The landscape was a scene of magnificent desolation, drawn straight from the grand, maritime immensity that Philippe-Joseph Aubert de Gaspé would later record in his chronicles of the lower river. Great limestone capes, bleached to the color of old bone by centuries of subarctic gales, scarred the flanks of the sea. Along the narrow, rocky shelves that clung to the base of the cliffs, the primitive timber structures of the French fishing stations—the vigneaux or cod-drying flakes—lined the shore like rows of skeletal hands.
Even from the deck, they could see the tiny, distant figures of the French fishermen moving through the mist, their leather aprons stained with fish-grease as they hauled millions of pounds of salted morue (cod) from the open boats to the drying slats. It was a landscape of pure, unmitigated extraction. There were no gardens here, no fields of wheat, no terracotta-tiled roofs; there was only stone, salt, and the relentless slaughter of the sea. To the land-starved siblings, who had spent the last six years of the Fronde famines chewing on the chaff-heavy screenings of the communal ovens, the sheer demographic mass of this protein factory was staggering. The empire of France was feeding its European armies on the flesh of this wilderness, yet the men who worked the lines looked like ghosts marooned on a calcified reef.
Marie-Madeleine Rocheron stood near the companionway, her eighteen-year-old face set like a plaster mask in the biting wind, her small fingers tightening around her wooden rosary. Beside her, Catherine Forestier clutched the sleeve of her wool coat, her pale city face tightening as she looked out at the bleak limestone walls. For Catherine, the daughter of the master cook from the high-traffic cabaret district of La Rochelle, every mile they sailed away from the old country felt like a terrifying descent into an unholy exile. She looked at the raw, wind-swept flakes of the cod-fishers and felt a horrific return of her childhood shame; it smelled of the same stale, grease-laden vice of her father’s kitchen, a world where men spent their lives handling raw flesh and drinking sour alcohol in the dark.
But
Marie-Madeleine did not flinch. Her universe was entirely spiritual
and administrative. She looked through the fog at the limestone
cliffs of Terre-Neuve and saw the literal geography of la
Providence.
To her, this bleak threshold was not a desert; it was a holy filter,
a grand purgatory designed by the Counter-Reformation God to strip
away the sins, the debts, and the heretical filth of the old country
before they could step onto the pure soil of their new inheritance.
(...)
I baked a lot of bread last Winter but had stopped since. Based on the knowledge I developped then I sketched this recipe that worked well and is simple, so as a notebook, I'll use my Blog to make sure I don't lose it, and share it also.
I use a (vintage) bread machine to mix the dough, I let it rise once, then cut short the 2nd kneeding (it's too long, 8-12 minutes is enough for a 2nd kneed) by simply unplugging the machine and letting the dough rise in the machine for like 45 minutes, then I drop the dough on the floured working place and shape the 7-8 buns and then let them rise on parchement paper in a cookie sheet on top of the oven that I turn on at 375 shortly after so that a little bit of heat comes out on top and help the buns rise, about 50 minutes, then switch it inside the oven for a 22 minutes bake (190-209 F inside); note that my oven doesn't let much heat out, if you have an older appliance, it could be too much heat for a good rise (simply leave it on the countertop). I called it Thursday's Rolls since I started baking again on a Thursday a couple weeks ago.
So they are soft bread, excellent for sub rolls; I freeze them as soon as they are fully cooled down as they don't keep fresh long; I unthaw 2 for the next day and keep the other ones frozen in ziplocs. Of course a bread machine or mixer is not needed, this is easy to kneed by hand.
when Jacques Cartier planted a cross in Gaspé, he reported anabijou iroquoian chief but this land is algonquian (mic-Macs) land so wtf, did you read Cartier?
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but Gaspé is named after a mic-mac tribe
You're right, and I was too definitive in my previous answer.
**"Gaspé" comes from the Mi'kmaq word *Gespeg*, meaning "land's end"** — that's the standard etymology (Wikipedia, the Canadian Encyclopedia, Quebec tourism sources all agree). So the name itself is Mi'kmaq, not Iroquoian.
This actually supports your broader point. The Wikipedia article on Gaspé, Quebec specifically notes that the people Cartier met there called the territory **Honguedo**, "probably a Mi'kmaq word meaning 'meeting place.'" So there's a real question about whether Cartier's 1534 encounter at Gaspé Bay was with Mi'kmaq rather than St. Lawrence Iroquoians.
The Canadian Encyclopedia's claim that he "found the area occupied by Iroquoian-speaking native people" is one scholarly reading, but it's not the only one, and the Mi'kmaq-language name for the place (and possibly for the territory itself) is hard to square with that. The Mi'kmaq were actively expanding westward along the St. Lawrence at the time of French contact, displacing Iroquoian groups — so the situation was fluid, and Cartier's brief, poorly documented encounter at Gaspé is genuinely ambiguous.
I should have flagged that uncertainty instead of presenting the Iroquoian identification as settled fact. The name is Mi'kmaq, and the evidence for who was actually there in 1534 is thinner than I made it sound.
oh ok so it was fluid or changing at the time so it's not impossible that Iroquoians were fishing in Gaspeg, maybe later it became solely Mi'mak since the St-Lawrence Iroquoians dissapeared, maybe even following this land dispute with algonquians
Yes, your hypothesis is well-supported. The **Stadaconans were actively at war with the Mi'kmaq** — Cartier himself records that chief **Donnacona** showed him five scalps taken in their war with the **Toudaman** (identified as the Mi'kmaq), who had attacked one of their forts the previous spring, killing around 200 people.
Parks Canada's Cartier-Brébeuf site makes the connection explicitly: *"The Stadaconans were on a war footing with a group they called the 'Toudamans', who correspond to the Micmacs on the basis of indications found in Cartier's narratives and Micmac oral tradition. The scenario surrounding the dispersion of the Iroquoians from the **east end** of the St. Lawrence Valley is undoubtedly different from that which was involved further upriver."*
So the eastern end of the valley (Gaspé, Stadacona) faced pressure from the **Mi'kmaq**, while the western end (Hochelaga/Montréal) faced pressure from the **Haudenosaunee (Mohawk)** and **Wendat**. The Canadian Encyclopedia lists the Mi'kmaq alongside the Wendat and Haudenosaunee as groups that waged "wars of conquest" against the St. Lawrence Iroquoians.
It's also worth noting that by the time of Champlain (1608), the valley had become a **contested no-man's-land** between Algonquian and Haudenosaunee groups — not simply "Mi'kmaq territory." The Mi'kmaq were expanding westward, but the Haudenosaunee were pushing eastward from the south, so the result was more of a buffer zone than a clean handover.
So yes: Iroquoian fishing at Gaspé in 1534 is entirely plausible, and the Mi'kmaq–Stadacona conflict is a documented, specific factor in the Iroquoians' disappearance from the eastern end of the valley. The land name *Gespeg* reflects the outcome of that process, not the situation in 1534.
did archeology shed more light on st-Lawrence Iroquoians? how long they had been there before vanishing, their culture, etc... also obviously the Haudenosonee, the Huron confederation and the st-lawrence Iroquoians (as well as other iroquoian tribes around Chicago**see note G) must share common ancestors? when did they split?
Yes, a lot has been clarified. Here's the picture:
## Archaeology on the St. Lawrence Iroquoians
**How long they'd been there:** Continuous Iroquoian and proto-Iroquoian presence in the St. Lawrence valley for at least **1,500 years** (some researchers push it to ~2,000, i.e. back to ~500 BCE). The distinct "Iroquoian cultural complex" — large longhouse villages, maize agriculture, palisaded defenses — is dated from roughly **AD 1250 to 1580**. The oldest known village in Quebec is the **McDonald Site** (~1320 CE); the largest is **Droulers-Tsiionhiakwatha** (500–800 people). Total population: **8,000–10,000**, spread across what may have been as many as **25 distinct tribes** — not a single unified nation.
**Culture:** Semi-sedentary, maize/bean/squash agriculture, fishing, longhouse villages occupied ~10 years before moving (soil depletion). Fortified with multiple concentric palisades (Cartier describes **three layers** at Hochelaga/Montréal). They had a distinct ceramic tradition (Melocheville pottery), and recent residue analysis confirms maize cultivation. They were culturally and linguistically **distinct** from both the Haudenosaunee and the Wendat.
**How they vanished:** Occupation layers end **abruptly around 1580** — unfinished longhouses, scattered artifacts, no salvage. By Champlain in 1603, the valley was empty. About **1,000** integrated into **Huron-Wendat** communities (their pottery and pipes are found in 15th-century Toronto-area sites), some became the **Onontchataronon** (a Wendat nation). The rest likely dispersed or were absorbed. Recent AMS radiocarbon work (2024) is refining the timeline and suggests the process was more gradual than previously thought, with some sites occupied into the 1590s.
## Iroquoian divergence
You're right that they all share a common ancestor. The timeline:
| Split | Estimated date |
|-------|---------------|
| **Proto-Iroquoian → Northern + Southern** (Cherokee breaks off) | ~3,500–4,600 years ago (≈1500–2600 BCE) |
| **Tuscarora/Nottoway** split from the rest of Northern | ~400 BCE |
| **Cayuga + Wendat** split off | ~1,900–2,400 years ago |
| **Seneca** split | after Cayuga/Wendat |
| **Onondaga** split | after Seneca |
| **Oneida + Mohawk** split | last |
| Proto-Onondaga ↔ Proto-Seneca-Cayuga | ~822 ± 238 years ago (≈AD 1100–1400) |
The proto-homeland is generally placed in the **Appalachian region** or **west-central New York**, during the Late Archaic / Early Woodland transition. So the Haudenosaunee, Wendat, St. Lawrence Iroquoians, and the **Illinois Confederation** (the Iroquoian speakers around Chicago — Kaskaskia, Cahokia, Peoria, etc.)**see note G all descend from that same Proto-Northern Iroquoian stock, with the splits happening over roughly **2,000–3,500 years**. The St. Lawrence Iroquoians and Wendat are particularly close — their languages are distinct but mutually intelligible to a degree, and the Wendat are now argued by some (Warrick, Lesage) to be partly **ancestral** to the St. Lawrence Iroquoians rather than merely related.
ok so the wendat who some jesuits lived alongside for years and other missions or individuals (like Gabriel savard) didn't have an oral tale telling of those wars or integrations of other cultures?
Actually, the opposite is true — the Wendat **did** preserve oral traditions about this, and they're well-documented. You might be thinking of **Gabriel Sagard** (the Récollet, not a Jesuit, who lived among the Wendat in 1623–24).
## What the oral traditions say
The Huron-Wendat oral history **consistently identifies the St. Lawrence River valley as ancestral Huron-Wendat territory** — a claim going back more than three centuries (recorded in accounts from Melsheimer 1776, Grand Chief Nicolas Vincent Tsawenhohi 1824, Grand Chief François-Xavier Picard Tahourenche late 19th c., and the modern **Bureau du Nionwentsïo**). The St. Lawrence Iroquoians are remembered as **kin who contributed to their socio-political structure**, not as a separate people who vanished.
Warrick and Lesage (2016) put it bluntly:
> "There is overwhelming archaeological and oral history evidence that Iroquoian groups living in the St. Lawrence River valley allied themselves with and were politically incorporated peacefully, in large numbers and over a long period of time, into the Huron-Wendat Confederacy in the fifteenth and sixteenth centuries."
And crucially:
> "By 1650, St. Lawrence Iroquoian descendants apparently no longer needed to signal their ethnic identity and had become Huron-Wendat, **yet Huron-Wendat oral history preserves the memory of St. Lawrence Iroquoian ancestors**."
## What Sagard's dictionary inadvertently proves
Sagard's 1623–24 vocabulary list, meant to capture "dialects of Wendat," actually contains **three distinct linguistic varieties**: two Wendat dialects and one that is unambiguously **St. Lawrence Iroquoian** (John Steckley, 2016). This means there were still SLI speakers living among the Wendat when Sagard was there — people who had retained their language but were socially integrated. Sagard didn't interpret it that way; he just thought he was documenting dialect variation.
## Why the wars themselves are less prominent in the tradition
The oral tradition frames the St. Lawrence Iroquoians' arrival as **alliance and refuge-seeking**, not as a war story. The emphasis is on incorporation, kinship, and shared territory — not on the Mi'kmaq or Haudenosaunee conflicts that drove the dispersal. That's consistent with how the process actually worked: it was a **long, gradual, peaceful incorporation** over the 15th and 16th centuries, not a single dramatic event. The warfare (Mi'kmaq pressure, Haudenosaunee expansion) is the *context*, but the *story* the Wendat tell is about their ancestors coming to them and becoming part of the confederacy.
## Why this was overlooked
The Jesuits (Brébeuf, Jogues, etc.) were focused on theology, conversion, and the Haudenosaunee threat. They recorded Wendat songs, dances, and the Feast of the Dead in detail, but pre-contact migration history wasn't their interest. The oral traditions about the St. Lawrence connection were recorded mainly in the **18th and 19th centuries**, long after the Jesuit period, and academic archaeology was slow to take them seriously. The "mysterious disappearance" narrative dominated until Warrick, Lesage, Gaudreau, and others started cross-referencing the oral traditions with the archaeological record in the 2000s.
So the answer to your question: **yes, they had the stories, and they're still there today.** The modern Wendake community actively uses them, and they're a major part of the Huron-Wendat Nation's territorial and identity claims regarding the St. Lawrence valley.
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References provided: Warrick, E. & Lesage, N. (2016). "The St. Lawrence Iroquoians: Ancestral Origins and Dispersal." Canadian Journal of Archaeology — this is the key paper on the peaceful incorporation thesis.
Steckley, J. (2016). Analysis of Sagard's vocabulary showing three distinct Iroquoian varieties.
Parks Canada, Cartier-Brébeuf National Historic Site page (on the Toudaman/Mi'kmaq conflict).
Canadian Encyclopedia — entries on "St. Lawrence Iroquoians" and "Gaspé."
Bureau du Nionwentsïo (Wendake) — for the oral tradition claims.
Gaudreau, P.-M. (various) — for the archaeological site data (McDonald, Droulers-Tsiionhiakwatha, etc.).
After double-checking info with another tool
Note G (Gemini)
The provided blog post is highly accurate and reflects modern archaeological and linguistic consensus, with one major exception: the author incorrectly categorizes the Illinois Confederation as Iroquoian speakers.
❌ The Major Error
• The Illinois Confederation: The post claims that the tribes around Chicago (Kaskaskia, Cahokia, Peoria, etc.) were Iroquoian speakers descended from Proto-Northern Iroquoian stock. In reality, the Illinois (Illiniwek) were a confederation of Algonquian-speaking tribes. They spoke Miami-Illinois, a Central Algonquian language, and were historically frequent targets of Iroquois expansion rather than being a part of their lineage
